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Super Star by ~YamiYugi-and-me:iconYamiYugi-and-me:

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©2008-2009 ~YamiYugi-and-me
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~Amei-san Dec 14, 2008, 10:06:20 PM
:hug: I love it Bob you did amazingly well on this!

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"When in a fight use your words, write them on your fist then punch your opponent in the face!"
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~H-Guderian Dec 14, 2008, 10:10:52 PM
It looks good, I like the colors.

Helpful criticisms, since requested:

The fingers could use more work, one on the right hand (our left), ring finger, beginsthick and quickly rejoins the normal width, its the most severe case, the fingers are made to look jointless due to this.

I admire you tried a hard perspective on the head, but that line you used on an otherwise even head is not as even.

The jacket's right side (our left) also seems to have more material to come out further and loop back without creating any stretches or folds.

That hopefully should help. Every good artist should always be on the search for critiques and feedback, props to you!
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~YamiYugi-and-me Dec 14, 2008, 10:25:54 PM
For the hands, I was expecting them to be a little awkward. It was more of a skill flaw then me just over looking it.

I rarely do any kind of perspective and as for this pose it was a first, I know what line you're talking about and I'll fix it if I can.

I wasn't really paying attention to folds for this one, I will in the future. The length of the sides were a mistake that I didn't notice until after so I'll definitely watch out for that next time.

Thanks, I appreciate the comment.
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~art-supporter Dec 15, 2008, 12:05:09 AM
So sorry for your loss...

This is an amazing piece though.
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~WavemasterShia13 Dec 15, 2008, 10:54:20 AM
:heart: I love the picture.. Any critique I had was already said.

The comic's a great idea. I know it's suppose to be by you but if you need any help with it let me know.

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"If kisses can't hold the man you love, then tears wont bring him back." -Rasputina

"That man's gonna be the death of me 'cause he's all I want in my life." -Emilie Autumn
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~jamichka Dec 15, 2008, 12:26:59 PM
I really love the colouring on the pants : ) You always do such great colouring!~
I can't wait to see the comic.

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A cuddly form of paranoia
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~H-Guderian Dec 15, 2008, 2:08:42 PM
Yep, I just try and deliver when I pass by and someone says they want a good critique.
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~Ruby-of-Fire-II Dec 15, 2008, 5:50:55 PM
Like I said before, I love the coloring, especially on the arrows on the DDR pad.
Glad I was of some help to you in finishing this. :hug::hug::hug:

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Shut up Mokuba. I'm busy flagging YouTube videos to compensate for the fact that I have an extremely small penis.

:sheepish: = :heart:
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